This page seems to be lacking texture, in comparison the all the other pages which now have effects included, this one is very plain. It's still the same scene as page 5&6 so maybe just a sunrise would assist in giving it a bit more detail. Apart from what was just mentioned; This scene has a good balance of image to text, it shows clearly the humour which I intended to portray throughout and gives a good indication to the story line.
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